Tuesday, June 1, 2010

Intro to Journal 4 "Faded Black Honda"

For my second piece I chose to use my journal number four called, “Faded Black Honda. We were asked to have a ten minute free write on a vehicle and be descriptive. I chose this piece because I feel for one of my first journals I grasped the topic we were learning about in class, which was being descriptive. A good example of description in this piece is, “Opening the door, a sharp screeching, came from the rusty door hinges. From the dingy, ripped drivers’ seat, came a mound of trash poring directly to my feet.”

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