Intro to "The Wishing Well"

For my first piece I chose to use my second MWA called, “The Wishing Well.” It is about my first experience at bar when I was only 19. I wrote this paper in the beginning of May. I picked this assignment because I feel it shows my ability of the writing process. At first, all I did was write down any topics that came to my head. Then I picked what I thought would be the most exciting to write about and made a web map. From there I made my first draft and got feed back from my response groups. That helped me push my page from about three pages to four. As a writer I feel this paper shows detail and order. For example, “There were four middle aged men sitting at the bar, all had a five o’ clock shadow. They were most likely friends from high school that never made it of Stanwood. The four men looked as if they worked in a factory or on a farm. The paper shows order by starting in the morning when I first wake up, the events of the day prior to the bar, my experience at the bar, and ends with me walking out of the bar at night.